The Un-edited Stream …

From a business writer with heavy credentials comes:

We will try to help decipher the tenuous and constantly changing world of raising capital and, introduce you to new opportunities for funding and the people who sign the checks.

Can you find the three inconsistencies in this one quote? Either they are “wrong” or inconsistent. Pick one from each menu. First pick a menu.

The bolded section “try to help” is another common weasel phrase.

I’ll make you no promise — (what it means)

The writer probably doesn’t read for idea. Maybe when we are all our own editors, we slack off. No time to read. Barely enough time(interest) in writing.