Music too loud. It overpowers the voice. Tip: open a microphone to a TV set playing your broadcast. Listen to that tape. What you hear is the “background” music instead of the foreground voice. This is amateur video production.

Tip to commentators. Don’t just speak, comment. A comment is an expression of an idea, either yours or an accurate summary of some other’s. This is aimed at Maria. “You’ve got a point.” Isn’t enough of a point to make.